Hmmm I'm a little confused about this one here. Your face is in focus but we can only see your eye, and it seems the focal point is the Premium Heart but it's out of focus :\. Not crazy about this composition as your subject is a little ambiguous. I'd practice taking a few more shots with some better placement of the elements.
Study up on some other ways to show everything while still emphasizing on what you want us to see. (ie: the glove? the face? the cosplay overall etc). I think you can do a bit better than this one bro =O! Always a lovely cosplay though, this pic just needs a bit more work :I! Keep up the good job =O!
I gotta say I didn't like this shot at all and I was going to delete but she forced me to send it to her anyway u_u
The focus was meant to be on Premium Heart (my contacts didn't want to stay in place and everything was blured ;-; ), the composition is all messed up, I know that. Also, we were really tired at the end of the day and not even one single shot with Premium Heart was ok.
Anyway, thank you for the tips (as I was the photographer, haha), you are allways giving me great tips to improve my work I'm studying more about composition, I hope future shots turn out better than this one.